First Storyboard

This is the first storyboard I had for my teaser..

1.Pan down from the sky to the girl laying down on the grass
2.Close-up of the girl (music begins)
3.Zoof out of girl laying on grass (dialogue "I miss you")
4.Pan to a shot of the empty grass (P.O.V shot)
5.Indence (she had it all)
6.Indence (Then she lost it)
7. Long shot of Girl walking away from camera
8. Fade into a POV from girl of City lights (dialogue "you loved it when we came here")
9.Dissolve high angle shot of girl crying on the crass
10.Fade into original shot of girl layin gon grass medium close-up (dialogue "I miss you")
11.Indence (Remember Me)
12.POV shot of the sky
13.Indence (Coming Soon)